in need of rewording
Feb. 9th, 2012 07:47 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
castironOne of my ongoing projects at work is getting our old out-of-print backlist back into print through print-on-demand. The cover copy of one book had the following phrase:
"But more importantly, the book suggests the depth to which New Zealand penetrated the man...."
The proofreader and I agreed that in spite of being memorable, that wording needed adjusting.
"But more importantly, the book suggests the depth to which New Zealand penetrated the man...."
The proofreader and I agreed that in spite of being memorable, that wording needed adjusting.